I have to thank everybody for the honest feedback on this tune. This is a very, very difficult song to recreate in MIDI and I agree that this thing still needs work. So, I have started the reworking of the MIDI performances and mixing of this song. I want to get the 12 string electric mix and EQ closer to the original and just do a bunch of clean up and corrections to some of the parts.
I also want to find a better drum kit to use inside of Ocean Way Drums in that the drum kit I have been using sounds GREAT on its own, but it is not that close to the classic Phil kit used on The Lamb.
I have some work to do and will get this song sounding better. After the work done on Lilywhite Lilith, this song sounds LAME to me as well.
Jim